I Have Seen Autumn Poem by Shogunoka Ledesma III

i like your Autumn poem too.... if a woman had to be just one season, yes, i think she would be autumn.....

Good imagery touching on four seasons, and knowing we're both living in the Philipines, no snow in colder months. Although in some areas like Baguio, there could be spring and fall...still we missed what's it like wintertime. We only have sunny and rainy seasons as what you mentioned on early part of this poem. And about the theme...its another sad story of unspoken love at the height of too much expectations as shown on ur other poems (why only 4, ur a great poet) Sometimes it feels nicer to wonder...left day-dreaming than face the sad reality of a frustrated love. Another good write kabayan! Iba talaga ang pinoy... Hope for more penning. U write with passion and wit and that deserves more to touch on other elements other than a frustrated love. But in fairness, such desperation paved way to inspiring a good poetry write. --cynthia