I Hate You And Love Myself Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

I Hate You And Love Myself

Rating: 4.9


Am an untold person,
Am an unread poet.
Read me, ask me, help me,
Understand or be away from me.
Be away, away from earth.
I hate you and love myself.

Hell with your jealousy,
Heaven in my silence.
I have lot to express,
About my love, my role.
Hold your words behind me.

I have a heart fools.
I mean human heart, got it?
Do you have a heart?
Do you know what a heart mean?
Nay, you don't and don't need.

You say I am broken,
Broken in love, in life.
But I say am alive,
Alive with memories, by blessings.
Very alive in my actions Madam.

Never I thought, never I noticed,
As hurt or failed in love.
Am victorious ever since,
I have won, in love too,
For still we are together Sir.

She is my strength, life
Today, tomorrow and everyday.
You may think am mad,
Ya, am mad for her, her love.
Feel it please, She is my breath.

I have plenty to say,
Plenteous to scold you people.
Judge me well, criticize,
But find justice to me.
Because am not a sinner.

You say I am changed,
Changed in words, attitude.
Changed in living itself,
Only answer to you is,
Sun has not changed, even me.

My words list everything,
Your lines spell something.
Something which is everything,
Everything to me,
Nothing for you.

What you know and will know ah!
My nights pass in thunder silence,
I live in loneliness, loveless.
Am dead, but like to live
Value me, believe me, for
We are living in one world.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zainab Zaheen 12 June 2011

very nicely written :)

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Diana Rose Tolentino 13 September 2011

well thought of and written. It is a push and pull but the essence of it is well executed. Good job.

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Raeanne Furfaro 17 August 2011

passionate, berating and reclaiming at the same time. Loved but loveless. You have put almost every emotion in this poem. It is a rich study of jealous people, in love, without love and I absolutely love the line 'I love myself' such an important thing to do.You have brought bitterness, love and heartbreak together in a richly woven poem. Very well done

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Raeanne Furfaro 12 August 2011

Very, very good. I feel your outrage, I feel your love, I feel your betrayal in the entire poem. This is a very nicely worded piece of work that is thought provoking and indeed the things we all go through. I like it very much. Well done and Brava!

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Isobel Byrd Billingsley 02 August 2011

Well expressed, just a little unhappy about some of the vocab chosen, it is best not to mix modern and classical words, it destroys the rythms, but I did enjoy this poem and found many links to my personal experience well expressed for me by you!

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Ace Of Black Hearts 13 June 2011

Of your poem written, I think this one is the best.. I gave it 10 for being your best poem..

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