I Hate That Time Poem by kaitreena stwert

I Hate That Time

Rating: 5.0


I Hate that time
When you hurt me
I Hate that time
When you ignore me
I Hate that time
When you tease me
I Hate that time
When you laugh on me
I Hate that time
When you kidding me
I Hate that time
When you make me upset
I Hate that time
When I Love you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 14 October 2011

Hello again, You have expressed your feeling remarkably in this poem. It show how much you loved that person, and how much pain you are taking as he is not loving you anymore. True feelings have to appreciated. Hence I rate your poem with perfect 10 + + + Good, Keep writing lovely lovesome poems............................. Thanks for sharing your heart with poem............Kudos!

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Vipins Puthooran 06 October 2011

Beautiful poem! The time of despair....well written

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