I Fly, I Fly, I Fly Higher And Higher~~~ Poem by Chuy Amante

I Fly, I Fly, I Fly Higher And Higher~~~

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I fly above
in no other sky
the smoke deters me not

Where there's smoke
there's a raging fire
I fly into the hot

The sky is perfect
that's why I fly,
I fly thru clouds and wind

I'll fly and fly until I die,
then rise up to
fly again

I'll fly and fly
'till I am high
on heaven's wing a loftin'

Two wings it takes
a synchronous flow

up and down
or just free and not begotten

There is nothing better
for a free bird
for eternity hot white
like pure wind-blown cotton,
I feel I'm flying out tonight

Wednesday, July 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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A superb piece with superb imagery.........nothing less than 10

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Neela Nath Das 30 July 2014

A superb imagery of freedom is portrayed wonderfully.We also hear the fluttering of big wings at the same time.Loved the pictorial quality.

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