I Finally Learned My Lesson Poem by Lorena Lalen Cruz

I Finally Learned My Lesson



I'm in need of someone who would understand
Someone who would care to give me a hand
But I guess you're just not that kind of person
Who would listen to my every reason

And I thought you were the perfect being
Who would be with me with every setting
And I honestly believed in you
That everything we shared was true

That we were the best of friends
And that what we have never bends
But I guess this is just one sided
Coz in my axis you just left me tilted

I'm the only one who listens
Even though it makesno sense
For everytime I dole out what's inside
You'd shut me up and make things just slide

That I guess I can handle
Coz atleast I'll be your candle
But your voice made another sound
And pushed me hard to the ground

You broke the number one rule
How could I be such a fool
Trusting you with every word
Is just something that is absurd

Now the lesson was learned
The page just need to be turned
Accept that you are not the one
And everything you did can't be undone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nashy Lamen 10 July 2009

I agree with julia.. If you keep the sin inside of you, It would be hard for you to talk to that someone... Keep up the good writing...

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Julia Pascual 30 June 2009

I hope you'd find it in your heart to forgive this 'someone'... =)

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Nashy Lamen 29 June 2009

I felt the anguish of this composition.... Unbearable... unrenewable... The flow of the words supporting one phrase to the other makes it more of a great poem.. Keep writing.. c:

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Danzen D. 28 June 2009

The bitterness and sadness of being betrayed..portrayed wonderfully in this great poem. Nice write! Keep writing!

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