Beach Girl


I Fell Into The Sky - Poem by Beach Girl

As I awoke this morning, I fell into the sky

The ocean left right after me and gracefully rolled by


The elephants stood on their toes and did a little dance

Pansies grew up ten feet tall and frightened little ants


I hear the mountains packed their bags and moved to Oklahoma

Palm trees put on winter coats and left for Nova Scotia


Birds decided not to fly and ordered Mini Coopers

Clouds became immovable and fell into a stupor


Rivers ran like two way streets confounding fish and men

Lemons, limes, they all grew sweet, causing kids to grin


Soon I awoke from this strange dream, and sighed a little sigh

Recalled the weird and wondrous as I fell into the sky


Comments about I Fell Into The Sky by Beach Girl

  • Gold Star - 12,159 Points Bri Edwards (8/18/2015 10:38:00 PM)

    ok, my third (at least) time reading this. THIS TIME immoveable looked funny, so i did a little research.

    im·mov·a·ble
    i(m) ˈmo͞ovəb(ə) l/
    adjective
    adjective: immoveable

    1.
    not able to be moved.
    lock your bike to something immovable like a lamp post
    synonyms: fixed, secure, stable, moored, anchored, rooted, braced, set firm, set fast; More
    stuck, jammed, stiff, unbudgable, four-square
    lock your bike to something immovable
    motionless, unmoving, immobile, stationary, still, stock-still, not moving a muscle, rooted to the spot;
    transfixed, paralyzed, frozen
    there he was, silent and immovable
    antonyms: mobile, moving, in motion
    (of a person) not yielding to argument or pressure.
    synonyms: steadfast, unwavering, unswerving, resolute, determined, firm, unshakable, adamant, unfailing, dogged, tenacious, inflexible, unyielding, unbending, uncompromising, obdurate, obstinate, iron-willed; More
    informalrock-steady, diehard
    she was immovable in her loyalties
    antonyms: fickle, unsure
    (especially of a principle) fixed or unchangeable.
    an immovable article of faith
    Law
    (of property) consisting of land, buildings, or other permanent items.

    nounLaw
    noun: immoveable

    1.
    immovable property.
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    and I WAS GOING TO SAY YOU MISSPELLED THE WORD IN YOUR POEM. BUT NOW I SEE IT IS OK SPELLED WITH 1 OR 2 es. :) bri (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,159 Points Bri Edwards (6/12/2015 7:54:00 PM)

    I loved reading this again. great rhymes and ‘ideas’, or did you really dream this? now it shall go into my/our June showcase on my PH site. thanks for sharing. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,528 Points Godfrey Morris (5/23/2015 7:52:00 PM)

    You have a great imagination. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,958 Points Darlene Walsh (4/20/2015 7:14:00 PM)

    A wonderfully mixed up world, I would like to visit. Love the line
    'Birds decided not to fly and ordered Mini Coopers'
    I could imagine little birds fitting very nicely behind the wheel of a Cooper.

    Brought smiles and laughs, always a very good thing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,159 Points Bri Edwards (10/29/2014 11:39:00 PM)

    .... an left for Nova Scotia .....and? minor typo (-2 points)

    Rivers ran like two way streets confounding fish and men...........i almost laughed here :) :)

    dance/ants......good one i, too, might have trouble making a better rhyme with oklahoma; what is oklahoma good for anyway! ? oh yeah, brian johnston's birthplace, i guess.

    added to MyPoemList. this is my kind of poem; meaning one i can appreciate better than many. thanks for sharing. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,426 Points Ken E Hall (8/22/2014 8:29:00 AM)

    This strange dream let out the bag a humerus funny look at sweet lemons and birds driving mini coopers with mountains moving... clever fantasy poem indeed...regards (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 730 Points Maya Hanson (4/5/2014 3:24:00 PM)

    very entertaining, amazing words, I like it! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,282 Points Nika Mcguin (2/14/2014 2:50:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, its reminiscent of Dr. Seuss, just a tad less zany. This is definitely one for exercising your imagination lol. Love it~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 380 Points Charles Jagongo Ogola (11/13/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    This a great piece of poetry.I enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 40,085 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/24/2013 2:10:00 AM)

    Totally love your gentle humor. Your poem has a rhythm all it's own. Great poem. Thank you for sharing it.
    RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,772 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/18/2013 10:44:00 PM)

    If it were possible to rate the readers' comments, I would have given Cassandra Jasmine's a full 10/10! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 54 Points Cassandra Jasmine (9/2/2013 11:14:00 PM)

    I love this poem so much! It sounds like a flowing river of honey. A beautiful fantasy.10/10!
    Cassandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner (8/20/2013 9:49:00 AM)

    Excellent..wish i can say better words than that.. You've got a brilliant imagery and i swear i got lost in it. Beautifully penned packed with fun too :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Kevin East (8/14/2013 6:59:00 AM)

    love your imagery...nice stuff! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,772 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/13/2013 8:58:00 AM)

    A nice fantasy ride. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (7/23/2013 2:05:00 PM)

    a nice write with good imagery. another fantasy dream (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 228 Points John Shea (6/21/2013 6:26:00 PM)

    That poem has magnetic power for any mind in tow. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (5/16/2013 3:46:00 PM)

    Very, very beachy. I liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Briana Benner (5/9/2013 10:04:00 AM)

    I found myself really enjoying this poem. The prose was simple and clean, and it was easy to follow. The imagery was also very well done; enough to let us see what you're seeing without being overly descriptive, which would be easy to do for a piece like this. It has very good flow, and gives off a sense of whimsy that I enjoyed. It's a bright little piece, and I like it :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 19, 2015


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