Beach Girl


I Fell Into The Sky - Poem by Beach Girl

As I awoke this morning, I fell into the sky

The ocean left right after me and gracefully rolled by


The elephants stood on their toes and did a little dance

Pansies grew up ten feet tall and frightened little ants


I hear the mountains packed their bags and moved to Oklahoma

Palm trees put on winter coats and left for Nova Scotia


Birds decided not to fly and ordered Mini Coopers

Clouds became immovable and fell into a stupor


Rivers ran like two way streets confounding fish and men

Lemons, limes, they all grew sweet, causing kids to grin


Soon I awoke from this strange dream, and sighed a little sigh

Recalled the weird and wondrous as I fell into the sky

Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy


Comments about I Fell Into The Sky by Beach Girl

  • Adeline Foster Adeline Foster (2/26/2016 3:44:00 PM)

    Loved your title, it ropes one into your fantasy. Read mine - O Dearest Love -
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (1/12/2016 7:19:00 AM)

    Palm trees put on winter coat,
    Birds decided not to fly
    Lemons, limes, they all grew sweet
    The elephants stood on their toes
    You fell into the sky………. I smiled when I read this poem
    What a powerful imagination.
    Was it really a dream or you vivid and poetic imagination. I think it is your great power of imagination. Thank you dear poetess. tony (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (11/29/2015 5:57:00 AM)

    Pansies and praises! With the muse of life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Shahin Latif Shahin Latif (11/21/2015 1:48:00 PM)

    Your ink is great. So, I love your poem. Thank you so much. (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (8/18/2015 10:38:00 PM)

    ok, my third (at least) time reading this. THIS TIME immoveable looked funny, so i did a little research.

    im·mov·a·ble
    i(m) ˈmo͞ovəb(ə) l/
    adjective
    adjective: immoveable

    1.
    not able to be moved.
    lock your bike to something immovable like a lamp post
    synonyms: fixed, secure, stable, moored, anchored, rooted, braced, set firm, set fast; More
    stuck, jammed, stiff, unbudgable, four-square
    lock your bike to something immovable
    motionless, unmoving, immobile, stationary, still, stock-still, not moving a muscle, rooted to the spot;
    transfixed, paralyzed, frozen
    there he was, silent and immovable
    antonyms: mobile, moving, in motion
    (of a person) not yielding to argument or pressure.
    synonyms: steadfast, unwavering, unswerving, resolute, determined, firm, unshakable, adamant, unfailing, dogged, tenacious, inflexible, unyielding, unbending, uncompromising, obdurate, obstinate, iron-willed; More
    informalrock-steady, diehard
    she was immovable in her loyalties
    antonyms: fickle, unsure
    (especially of a principle) fixed or unchangeable.
    an immovable article of faith
    Law
    (of property) consisting of land, buildings, or other permanent items.

    nounLaw
    noun: immoveable

    1.
    immovable property.
    ===================
    and I WAS GOING TO SAY YOU MISSPELLED THE WORD IN YOUR POEM. BUT NOW I SEE IT IS OK SPELLED WITH 1 OR 2 es. :) bri (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (6/12/2015 7:54:00 PM)

    I loved reading this again. great rhymes and ‘ideas’, or did you really dream this? now it shall go into my/our June showcase on my PH site. thanks for sharing. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Godfrey Morris Godfrey Morris (5/23/2015 7:52:00 PM)

    You have a great imagination. (Report) Reply

  • Darlene Walsh Darlene Walsh (4/20/2015 7:14:00 PM)

    A wonderfully mixed up world, I would like to visit. Love the line
    'Birds decided not to fly and ordered Mini Coopers'
    I could imagine little birds fitting very nicely behind the wheel of a Cooper.

    Brought smiles and laughs, always a very good thing. (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (10/29/2014 11:39:00 PM)

    .... an left for Nova Scotia .....and? minor typo (-2 points)

    Rivers ran like two way streets confounding fish and men...........i almost laughed here :) :)

    dance/ants......good one i, too, might have trouble making a better rhyme with oklahoma; what is oklahoma good for anyway! ? oh yeah, brian johnston's birthplace, i guess.

    added to MyPoemList. this is my kind of poem; meaning one i can appreciate better than many. thanks for sharing. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (8/22/2014 8:29:00 AM)

    This strange dream let out the bag a humerus funny look at sweet lemons and birds driving mini coopers with mountains moving... clever fantasy poem indeed...regards (Report) Reply

  • Maya Hanson (4/5/2014 3:24:00 PM)

    very entertaining, amazing words, I like it! (Report) Reply

  • Nika Mcguin Nika Mcguin (2/14/2014 2:50:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, its reminiscent of Dr. Seuss, just a tad less zany. This is definitely one for exercising your imagination lol. Love it~ (Report) Reply

  • Charles Jagongo Ogola Charles Jagongo Ogola (11/13/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    This a great piece of poetry.I enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Roseann Shawiak (10/24/2013 2:10:00 AM)

    Totally love your gentle humor. Your poem has a rhythm all it's own. Great poem. Thank you for sharing it.
    RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (10/18/2013 10:44:00 PM)

    If it were possible to rate the readers' comments, I would have given Cassandra Jasmine's a full 10/10! (Report) Reply

  • Cassandra Jasmine Cassandra Jasmine (9/2/2013 11:14:00 PM)

    I love this poem so much! It sounds like a flowing river of honey. A beautiful fantasy.10/10!
    Cassandra (Report) Reply

  • Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner (8/20/2013 9:49:00 AM)

    Excellent..wish i can say better words than that.. You've got a brilliant imagery and i swear i got lost in it. Beautifully penned packed with fun too :) (Report) Reply

  • Kevin East Kevin East (8/14/2013 6:59:00 AM)

    love your imagery...nice stuff! (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (8/13/2013 8:58:00 AM)

    A nice fantasy ride. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (7/23/2013 2:05:00 PM)

    a nice write with good imagery. another fantasy dream (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 19, 2015


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