I Fell Before You A Broken Man Poem by James Comerford

I Fell Before You A Broken Man

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I had no answers to your questions
I could find no words to appease you
I tried but could not please

I fell before you a broken man!


You spat your venom at a man dead inside.
I had nowhere to go, nowhere to hide.
I just sat alone and let you scream.
let you destroy my dream



Then i got up and walked away
I had no place to run, no place to go.
So i walked and cried and walked a bit more
Knowing that i would never again pass your door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 01 August 2008

This poem is just like the first. In terms of quality and meaning, they are derived from the same place. I might prefer more variety, but if these are the only two of their kind I won't complain. GW62

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