I Feel Proud Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Feel Proud

Rating: 4.9


I feel elated and so proud,
Creative work speak so loud,
I accepted it as simple food,
Something to think and deliver the good,

You feel burdened when heavily taxed,
Evening at home with body relaxed,
Solution in sight with problem waxed,
Junior get promotion when senior axed,

I found honorable place,
Happy to feel with glow on face,
So much craze with heavy mad race,
Unworthy on top and leaving behind ace,

I had feeling with anger and hate,
Why so many tricks against fate,
What, if creative work is read little late?
Certainly it is fake with artificial rate,

I wondered what would happen?
Why not competition kept wide and open?
Emerging poets may find their due,
Wide horizons with broader view,

There may be many standing in queue,
Sad, helpless for the want of dues,
Sun may shine in their bright luck,
Relentless march and not sitting as duck

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maulin Shah 10 August 2009

it gives joy for crative work....10

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Suwarna Patil 10 August 2009

when something good is delivered...10

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Jigisha Vyas 11 August 2009

when something good is performed by me in person...10

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Raju Rajput 11 August 2009

good work give some satisfaction....10

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Sulochna Pandit 11 August 2009

we should feel proud...10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 August 2021

Moreover, you are the lion of the sphere!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 August 2021

Yes sir, you should always feel proud because you are a wonderful poet

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Louis Rams 04 November 2009

emerging poets may find their dues. you have found your dues for the poetry you write and the following you keep. don't stop writing, because we need to be kept on track. a double ten

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Darshna Chopra 18 October 2009

feel elated and so proud, Creative work speak so loud, I accepted it as simple food,

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Ashley Paul 16 September 2009

You feel burdened when heavily taxed, Evening at home with body relaxed, Solution in sight with problem waxed, Junior get promotion when senior axed

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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