I Feel Perfect Now Poem by Jahan Zeb

I Feel Perfect Now

Rating: 4.5


I know the emptiness of heart mine
Empty for more than centuries
Since time unknown
Awaiting every moment
Every chamber of it
An angel with limitless charm
Complete in herself
With powers unimaginable
Matchless beauty
More than Helen or Medusa
There you appeared
To my left from nowhere
Like sunshine on a cold cloudy day
Like moonlight far in the wood
On a soul lost in complicated paths
You gave me warmth
You gave me light
Holding my hand
Promise! Forever for me
Are shines, warmth and light yours
Mine and only mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Musfiq Us Shaleheen 31 December 2012

very nicely done...lovely love... awesome..

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Unwritten Soul 18 December 2012

Is this a reply to Gulsher poem, as you mentioned Medusa and Helen here.. a bright freedom feeling wrapping around your days! I guess so haha_Soul

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 December 2012

A fab love poem sparkling on Poemhunter, yeah go ahead show it to yor other half, im sure she wil b jus as delightd as we r readin it.

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Sallam Yassin 17 December 2012

LOVE MAKE U FEEL GOOD FEEL LIKE THAT FEEL LIKE BIRD AS U NEED U CAN FLY/ PIECE OF LOVE

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Payal Parande 17 December 2012

oh sir! i am in awe it is incredible it is magical i am lost for words it is just breathtaking

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Malakand Pakistan
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