I Feel Poem by Lexus Box

I Feel

Rating: 5.0


I feel you in my dreams
I feel you calling to me
I feel you longing for my touch
I feel you wanting my lust
i feel you needing me
but in realtiy
you don't notice me
you ingore the love between us
so I go on still wanting you
needing you
calling you
but my love can't wait no more
say goodbye as I walk out the door

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 May 2011

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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