I Feel Poem by Jinal Oswal

I Feel



I feel the need of the things to settle down,
I feel the need of we living in a town,
I feel the need of holding your hand,
I feel the need of we being tied in one band,
I feel the need of the clouds that will shade us,
I feel there should be no fuss,
I feel the need of colors in life,
I feel the need of we have no strife,
I feel the need of love that you hold,
All I want is me to be your mould.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 16 November 2011

You know what you need that makes you feel what you felt...and all you said nothing but true words from heart and beautiful, so poetic and colorful emotions! _Unwritten Soul

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Bernard Snyder 19 October 2011

Written with a lot of passion and sincerity it seems! Strong words right here. Thanks for sharing!

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The 4am Poet Worm 19 October 2011

all i want is me to be your mould...wonderful finish.. :)

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Jacqui Broad 18 October 2011

Marriage? Beautiful love declaration, or possible vows. May you find the right shape to mould to...

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Dave Walker 18 October 2011

All i want is me to be your mould. very strong words. must be love. great poem.

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