I Don'T Know Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Don'T Know

Rating: 4.9


Beat by beat heard,
pulse in mother’s womb,
question being asked,
whether mail or female,
I answered ' I don’t know'

Was the feeling lovely,
word by word remembered,
when recalled at ease,
remained unanswered,
why? ' I don’t know'

looked at the eyes,
tried to read between lines,
for ayes and no's
pushed mind very hard,
mind humbled, why?
'I don’t know'

ready to leave empire,
hut for palace,
and life to death,
no reson, why?
I don’t know,

was a 'wait' correct phrase,
answer for real,
can hunt be still on,
but for what?
I don’t know,

Will I die without?
Fulfillment of love,
is the life not so simple?
Or with tragic end”
I don’t know,

when you hit me back,
with rose or simple 'no'
is desire a crime?
Really one has to die?
Or go mad, why?
I don’t know

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shilpa Maheswari 08 August 2009

good neasy excuse....10

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Santoksingh Jadeja 08 August 2009

ready made excuse to be advanced...10

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Shilpa Maheswari 08 August 2009

very childish show....10

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Kamli Kamal 08 August 2009

very lame excuses....10

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Maulin Shah 10 August 2009

to escape say u donot know....10

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Darshna Chopra 18 October 2009

Beat by beat heard, pulse in mother’s womb, question being asked, whether mail or female, I answered ' I don’t know'

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Ashley Paul 16 September 2009

Beat by beat heard, pulse in mother’s womb, question being asked, whether mail or female, I answered ' I don’t know'

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Chetna Purohit 16 September 2009

Beat by beat heard, pulse in mother’s womb, question being asked, whether mail or female, I answered ' I don’t know'

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Saroj Davde 05 September 2009

Beat by beat heard, pulse in mother’s womb, question being asked, whether mail or female, I answered ' I don’t know'.......10

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Vijay Suwarnkar 19 August 2009

it is simple excuse to show some weakness...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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