Treasure Island

Ruby Mostazir

(dhaka)

I Don't Believe In Roses


You promised me for two roses,
When we reached dere on garden
All da roses were died!

Now roses are blooming again on mountain
You must be busy to adorn your wedding bed?

Submitted: Monday, April 22, 2013
Edited: Monday, April 22, 2013

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  • Ed Nigma (1/12/2014 2:54:00 AM)

    He should plant a rose garden surrounding your property! Or does that seem a bit lazy? =) @- ]- - ]- - Flower for you =) (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (5/1/2013 11:38:00 AM)

    you promised me two roses, ...........not even one materialised...nice broken heart poem....like it (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (4/23/2013 9:54:00 AM)

    Rose the imagery of.. two died blooming in mountain, wedding bed It's not the soul n body /As per me Mountain is the indicative diction for female/wedding bed relates / promised for two kids...u know better kindly explain deep poem (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (4/22/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    roses - soul and body, everywhere, all pervading, eternal
    Roses are blooming and blooming, life-roses. fine poem, I love it, thought-provoking. (Report) Reply

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