Ruby Mostazir

Rookie - 22 Points (dhaka)

I Don't Believe In Roses


You promised me for two roses,
When we reached dere on garden
All da roses were died!

Now roses are blooming again on mountain
You must be busy to adorn your wedding bed?

Submitted: Monday, April 22, 2013
Edited: Monday, April 22, 2013

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Comments about this poem (I Don't Believe In Roses by Ruby Mostazir )

  • Rookie - 22 Points Ruby Mostazir (1/12/2014 3:12:00 AM)

    @Ed Nigma dis is so nice of you my friend thnzs for da flower :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,665 Points Wahab Abdul (5/1/2013 11:38:00 AM)

    you promised me two roses, ...........not even one materialised...nice broken heart poem....like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Ruby Mostazir (4/28/2013 1:30:00 PM)

    nothing symbolic...da poem is abt a promise between 2 lovers!
    thnks, (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,196 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (4/23/2013 9:54:00 AM)

    Rose the imagery of.. two died blooming in mountain, wedding bed It's not the soul n body /As per me Mountain is the indicative diction for female/wedding bed relates / promised for two kids...u know better kindly explain deep poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 26,822 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/22/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    roses - soul and body, everywhere, all pervading, eternal
    Roses are blooming and blooming, life-roses. fine poem, I love it, thought-provoking. (Report) Reply

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