Ali Sabry

Rookie - 76 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

I Do Not Only Loving You


I do not only loving you
I'm dying on you honey
I'm dying on your romantic love
Only my god know how much I'm loving you from whole my white romantic heart
I'm walking in your air when I am with you
& your opinions sure it's very important for me
For make myself loving you
Whole my thinking only is about you
My brain is busy only for you specially
I do not only loving you
You are my life angel
I wish that I can stay with you in all the time
I wish that I can spend whole my life with you only
Darling you mean to me whole the world
Your love is unlimited
Your loves no have borders
You are my infinity romantic love

Submitted: Wednesday, October 24, 2012

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  • Rookie - 119 Points Stan Petrovich (12/13/2012 5:47:00 AM)

    You definitely need to do some reading. May I suggest TS Eliot, Ezra Pound & Hart Crane, if not Stephen Crane for whom I have a special affinity. This poem you wrote really drips with overemotion and too-symbiotic romanticism. I forgive the grammar, however. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Rumi Roy (11/27/2012 5:51:00 AM)

    I guess, the lady will not be able to stop herself in loving you after reading this. I loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Derek Haughton (11/14/2012 11:20:00 AM)

    I agree with the criticism of your English vooiced by one or two others and i could criticise every line for one reason or another. Forgive me, I have my own work to do, I don't have time to assist you in that. Again this is over-long, repeating itself although the depth of your feeling comes through try to use a little restraint, much of the time 'less is more'. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Darwin Kiong (10/30/2012 6:34:00 AM)

    Words aren't enough to express the feelings of love that is so red and full of living bliss.
    Continue to express the love that has always been the infinite and everything. [3 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lizzie O'neill (10/28/2012 1:09:00 AM)

    i think this poem is wonderful.. only thing i would say is the English isn't that good. If you could improve on that i believe your poems could be truly magnificent. If you need any help with this please feel free to message me.. Otherwise a lovely poem (Report) Reply

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