I Did Wept Poem by Asif Baloch

I Did Wept

Rating: 5.0


I did wept for all my life
Happy feelings long since died
Kingdom of loneliness does resides
Lurking shadows, howling soul
Rusted heart once was gold
Eyes thus faded aging old

Stuck into the myth of thoughts
Yearned for life which never ought?
Running away here and there
Stumbling, climbing on the
Mountain of sorrows
Wanted smiles but couldn’t
Borrow

Soon I will be lost in this mist
Forgotten thus even exist
Loosing self is best for all
Just let go wounded soul
Make it escape from this
Dark hole

I will keep an eye when it leaves
Slowly, painfully gliding free
Once out it would again smiles
Neither regrets nor denials

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvin Banggollay 04 November 2008

Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem reflecting your passionate display of your wisdom. Best wishes, melvin

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Seema Chowdhury 04 November 2008

always remember that wonuded soul can be cured with the balm of love and care. it will not last forever.

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Anjali Sinha 06 November 2008

wow, asif this is very rich text a masterpiece 'Rusted heart once was gold Eyes thus faded aging old' i loved it +++++++10 and A+ regards anju

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 06 November 2008

Nice poem sir...as always rich in intensity. Thanks.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 07 November 2008

Beautifully penned with apt, striking words......10

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Ben Gieske 25 November 2008

A good poem using images to express your feelings.

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Fiona Davidson 17 November 2008

A very deep one this...well written..thank you

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Iram Jamil 14 November 2008

wow.............. nyc piece of work...

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Sandra Fowler 14 November 2008

Very eloquent. Memorable lines.abound. You paint sadness very effectively, but one must be sorry for your tears. Kind regards, Sandra

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 November 2008

Sounds like deep depression ran uncontrolled.The description was superb.A well penned piece.keep coming Asif!

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