I'D Search For You Poem by Beach Girl

That we would endlessly circle back to the place of perfect love....Such a simplistic approach that spoke volumes....exquisitely written. Applause and PEACE...

WOW! not only did i find one i hadn't commented on, but i found this FANTASTIC POEM. the only thing 'wrong' with it is that it's a 'love poem'. ugh! ! but such a wonderfully written one that it zooooomss to MyPoemList. I love the flow, the relatively short third lines AND that they each end in “you”. (of course you ARE referring to ME, but we needn’t tell everyone!) I do worry about a person walking BACKWARDS into the night; isn’t that just ASKING for a fall? ? the idea of turning back time by spinning “the earth back round the sun” is, to me, unique and fun. very clever. no typos, good rhyming; it has it all. too bad you had to mention “love”. ugh! and I think I’ll share it with at least one PH friend. and it would make a great addition to one of my PH showcases. think about it. bri :)

Lovely look at if 'I' in this poem, backwards walking so original way to say I love you... will make his silly smile into a big grin...regards

The beach for me like the sea. Warm waves that clean your feet. Pulled back in, washed up again there along the shore...iip

Thank you Dr. Dike, I appreciate your kind words.

Beautiful love poem well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.

If I could fly beyond the earth's blue sky From star to star I’d step, gazing from on high For views of you.. desire expressed so wonderfully well.. thank u dear poetess. tony

I read some of your poems and this is my favorite so far, keep writing, will look forward to reading more from you. Thanks for sharing.

I just noticed something: the unique rhyme scheme. O this earns a '10' from me, please.