I Cry Poem by Daniel Madden

I Cry

Rating: 5.0


At the momment my heads pretty messed up
trying to block out the voices who never shut up
Things may have got off at the wrong start
but no longer can my head deny my heart

I probably seem to wear my heart on my sleeve
but inside i cry bleed and forever greive
Is there really anyone out there who wants me
i may seem shallow but im as deep as the sea

Inside is nothing no feeling just numbness
i cant help feeling down and helpless
All i want is that special girl
who would make my heart dance and twirl

At the momment im down seeing the world
in a haze i just came out of my longest relationship
it lasted 3 days

I just want to lie down and die, you wouldnt believe
how many times ive tried but instead i lie down and i cry
finally silence engulfs my mind, like the darkness making
me feel naked and blind

I feel used and broken my feelings tossed around
like a cheap gift or token so now i will no longer say how i
feel, rather stay in my mind of darkness and steel

My mind is the only sanctuary people cannot breach but my loves
still there just within reach so if there is anyone who is out there
who wants to be mine so through the darkness the moon can shine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Slade Oriley 10 July 2009

This is a great poem. :) It's okay to show emotions. It takes a real man to admit he cries. well keep up the good work. :) 10

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Obinna Eruchie 16 June 2009

And there will be a light to be sealed upon your face and into your heart to flush out your sorrow. Touching to read, keep it up.

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