I Cry Poem by Stevie Taite

Can I cry and get over you now? Brave mind Stop tormenting That's enough I'm repenting Can I cry and let go of you now? ...... Nice poem. I like the intensity

sure it is a sad day

strong emotional poem

Everyone has their sad days. I think the trick is to make sure they don't outnumber your happy days. Thanks for sharing. There are some events that I don't think we really 'get over', we just move on. The idea of a tired mind tormenting and feeling as though you're repenting Is genius and true.

Groooaaaannnn! This poem makes my heart beat funny in a sore, achy way. Hugs x

Sweet soul Stop your bearing I am done Done with caring Can I cry and let go of you now? I feel as if you've taken those lines from my mouth. Why won't our emotions listen to our brains? They always seem to feud. This is beautiful and honest. Going on my favourites list.

a beautiful piece i think, sucks how emotions can be so stubborn dont you think

A sad poem for sure, but sadness can't last forever. Chin up kiddo.