I Cried Poem by Raven Brent

I Cried

Rating: 5.0


I cried so much I drowned in my river.
My tears are so much they couldn't dry.
Whatever your love's done for me is no good.
For this you would cry me a river.
I fell down, down a deep cavern.
I thought your hand would help.
You pushed it back and pulled me.
I cried so much I drowned in your river.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 20 October 2009

A short but very meaningful cry that happens so often and is felt with pain in the heart +++++10 regards

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Tobias Gray 08 October 2009

very sad piece...10+

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