I Couldn'T Hold On Your Hands! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

I Couldn'T Hold On Your Hands!

Rating: 5.0


Time went on slipping further
You too slipped away
In span of time.
Helplessly I watched you
Both slipping
With no grip on
I couldn't hold on your hands.

Well time was running very short
My spell to tell
I love you
Was very long.
Before I could
Tell you anything
I lost grip of you.
I couldn't hold on your hands.

Was it my love for you,
Was not strong enough,
Was it just one side affair,
that time in my square was very shorter.

I kept running inside a circle
If I could break away the square
I would have been in your arms my dear!


©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR
© 2014 Geetha Jayakumar

Note. My Imagination.

Sunday, February 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 01 February 2015

Great imagination with great composition on softer emotions......Geetha.......amazing write....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 February 2015

Time went on slipping. Really sorry I could not hold hands of time as like as wings of sky. Amazing poem with wonderful imagery. Special poem definitely.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 February 2015

Delayed Justice is Denied Justice, and when justice is denied one will have to face the consequences. Love is the supreme justice, a justice not only with the beloved only but a justice with ourselves as well...............10

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Valsa George 01 February 2015

Regret over a lost opportunity.....! To have loved and lost is better to have never loved at all! Great write! Enjoyed the flow of words and feelings!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 February 2015

Love slips away - hold on to the hands firmly. Beautifully put in the poem.

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Lyn Paul 04 May 2015

Your heart touches us all like no other, again I read these words seeing future light shining.

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Lalitha iyer 02 May 2015

Briefly have conveyed the message strongly.........................very nice

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Kee Thampi 20 March 2015

Some poems I missed, now this lovable poem made me to a dream of reality Was it my love for you, Was not strong enough, Was it just one side affair, that time in my square was very shorter.

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Harindhar Reddy 08 February 2015

The beauty i see these line is uncomparable. Yes we hide our feelings for a longtime. by the time we are people the person slips away and we linger then for a life. Time went on slipping further You too slipped away In span of time.

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Soumita Sarkar 06 February 2015

Wow! ! ! ..such an excellent poem Geehta Madam...loved it like anything...Thanks.

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