I Cheated The Devil Poem by louis rams

I Cheated The Devil

Rating: 5.0


there death stood at my front door
knocking, knocking, and trying to get in
standing outside with a fastidious grin.

he said it was close to that time for me to go.
that i was at deaths door, 'BUT I DID'NT KNOW'
i ignored my body and all the signs
i should have listened, i had the time.

now i'm laying on the ground
no one to turn to, no one around.
no strength to scream, can't make a sound.
i'm gasping for air, and a heavy pain in my chest
is this where i'll die, and be laid to rest.

grasping my chest, i turned slowly around
there an angel stood, not making a sound.
then i heard him whisper in my ear:
i gave you the signs which you chose to ignore
should i give you another chance
and pick you up from the floor?

i pleaded with him 'please let me stay'
i'll listen to you and i'll change my way.
with a smile and touch, the pain went away
i got up then and began to pray.

the doctors said it was a HEART ATTACK
i cheated the devil on this particular day
i laughed as he turned his back and walked away.


LISTEN FOR THE SIGNS.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 05 June 2009

Your vivid story certainly captured my attention.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Heather S 02 June 2009

i can relate to this, my father had a heart attack but he survived and it hurt our whole family great write

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Kranthi Pothineni 02 June 2009

Interesting write. With a fruitful ending. Nice one.

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Christine Kerr 02 June 2009

Wonder where this came from. I heard about a guy who said he had a dream about meeting the devil at his front door and the response was 'Who were you expecting.... Santa Claus, ' Interesting thoughts

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i think in the final moment the soul would console the body to leave....here the body has been given an extension...great write

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