I Cannot Wait Any More. Poem by Amitava Sur

I Cannot Wait Any More.

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Now I have lost all my patience
I cannot wait any more.

I learned to live – with my tears,
And to live with myself alone.

Neither there is any dream left
Nor any hope anymore

Not even any complaint
With any restlessness around.

If anything residual
That remains in my heart.

That is my love for you
Which will remain for ever

I kept my love very carefully,
Inside my heart’s core.

Now I’ll live with the love you left
Silently alone.

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Amitava Sur (9.04.2014) 1-45 am

Thursday, April 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Grief
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 06 May 2014

I love this poem of silent love. The first two lines of your poem speaks of an impatient mind, the last two of a serene, silent and settled one. A nice poem to read and enjoy. I loved and agree with the comments of Valerie Dohren and Soulful Heart.

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Patricia Grantham 11 April 2014

Ti have loved and lost is better to have never loved at all. Keep hope alive! Nice write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 April 2014

Now I’ll live with your love only Silently alone. lovely lines....10 love to live and believe and that it demands sacrifice and future promises

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Valerie Dohren 10 April 2014

As long as you remember the love Amitava, you have something to treasure.

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Soulful Heart 10 April 2014

so poignant.......................a soulful love that is nurtured in loneliness...........

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