I Cannot Promise Poem by Eleonor Santiago

I Cannot Promise

Rating: 3.5


I can not give you everything
coz you are my all
I can not give you the moon and the stars
coz you are my moon at night and my brightest star
I can not say I want you
coz you are all that I need
I cannot promise the heavens and the earth
Coz you are my heaven
and whenever I'm with you the earth is vanished
You are my all, my love my life
Forever with you, I am in heavens delight..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 24 June 2016

It's a wonderful poem! How can you promise him/her anything, when he/she is: 'You are my all, my love my life Forever with you, I am in heavens delight.. ' The poem ends nicely with the above two lines.

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