Is It Poetry

Gold Star - 32,431 Points (1958 - / Bus-Boys And Poets, Washington D.C.)

I Cannot Make Her Come Any Faster - Poem by Is It Poetry

I cannot make her come any faster,
Why does the cotton lay wet in the fields?
The sea, the ocean the waves, leave
There mark on her face.
Someone alone inside of my head, speaking
For me I have read.
Today she's o.k. in the past, she was not,
Where does the time we have used, where does
It go?
Tomorrow again she I knew,
When it rains, her cotton lies wet in the field.

Topic(s) of this poem: green


Comments about I Cannot Make Her Come Any Faster by Is It Poetry

  • (5/19/2017 10:07:00 PM)


    All poetry is good poetry
    except my bad poetry
    but I love your poetry
    because it makes me
    think
    insanely

    Is this poetry?
    I can't make her come any faster
    than this

    10++++++++++
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  • Jefferson Carter (5/19/2017 8:58:00 PM)


    Is It Poetry? Yes, but not very good poetry. You need to read LOTS of the best contemporary verse if you're going to improve as a poet.

    If you'd like, check out my new website:

    jeffersoncarterverse.com

    Tell me what you think. Yrs, JC
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 19, 2017



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