I Cannot Poem by Dee Daffodil

I Cannot

Rating: 5.0


I've been cooped inside for days
And tied to this bumpy old chair
I've been reading for hours it seems
And still I have nothing to share

My kids have given up hope
That their mother they will some day know
And I can't help but wonder myself
Is it my mind or my butt that does grow?

I simply cannot continue
To read all the poems on this site
While others are grand and eloquent
Mine I fear are just shite!

Alas dear friends...I go in search of chores to do...
Hugs from Dee Daffodil (HW) 25 January,2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Reynolds 25 January 2007

'What chores? ' he asked. 'A double-Scotch! ' she replied. Danny

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Francesca Johnson 25 January 2007

No peace for the wicked, eh, Dee? Love, Fran xxx ps liked Danny's comment!

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Chuck Audette 01 February 2007

Haha! That's me after finding you've got 15 new poems since that last time I checked, and wanting to read them all. -chuck

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Barry Van Allen 27 January 2007

Dee, I sort of want to agree with Danny! But, I cannot! - - - It's just wrong - - - Think... 3 !

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Geoff Warden 25 January 2007

Yep......dole away Dee and write as yee please............we wana read! ! ! ! ! ! 1

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Diane Violet 25 January 2007

Like Frank says dole out the chores....write, write, write....take the girls out for a bite or a nice bike ride (you know what I mean) then right back here because I so enjoy reading your fabulous writes! ............................Diane

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 25 January 2007

THERE WILL BE NO SWAN SONGS SUNG HERE, MY DEAR...NOW YOU TAKE THOSE WRETCHED CHORES, DOLE THEM OUT TO THE KIDS & HUBBIE THAT HAVEN'T GIVEN YOU THE TIME TO WRITE YOUR AWARD WINNING NOVEL AS YET, & GET BACK ON TO THAT PC....(and read me) AHEM.....AND PRIORITIZE APROPRIATELY, YOUNG LASS....ON-LINE.....NOT CLOTHES -LINE! Good Write FJR

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