I Can'T Wait To Meet You Poem by Dave Cullwick

I Can'T Wait To Meet You

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I always try to stay distracted
The more I think, the more it aches
I know someday our paths will cross,
And I know you can’t rush fate.
I work each day on a better me,
Cuz I think mine’s the fate I make.
But do I go out and try to find you,
Or patiently must I wait?

Forever hopeful, I go on with life,
Knowing one day you will be my wife.
For now just know one thing is true,
It’s that I can’t wait to meet you.
The thing to know to get you through,
Is that I can’t wait to meet you.

Are you just around the corner,
Or are you miles away?
Do you lie awake and think of me,
Are you missing me today?
Looking forward to tomorrow,
I know it’s yet another day.
One less day to walk alone,
Before you come my way.

Forever hopeful, I go on with life,
Knowing one day you will be my wife.
For now just know one thing is true,
It’s that I can’t wait to meet you.
The thing to know to get you through,
Is that I can’t wait to meet you.

Keep on smiling, we’ll be as one, us two.
One day I’m going to meet you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 12 December 2008

I like the 'chorus' - like repetition of the second stanza and the easy warmth you convey throughout this rather wistful poem. I detect also, a faint smile in your final line, which appeals. Congratulations on your first post. Look forward to more. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Aliyah Al-Sharji 12 December 2008

nicely written, what a good poem, i really liked it, keep on writting my friend

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Kc Esposito 02 January 2009

i like it~ but the one thing i sorta dislike is that it implies fate.... i dont believe in fate but i do believe in cause and effect, i suppose thats good enough

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Ruth Warren 12 December 2008

Wow wonderful peom, can't wait to read more from you

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jennifer hall 12 December 2008

i love this poem..u will sure have your true love soon

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linzi- kidd 12 December 2008

this is an excellent poem..well written -w/ great emotion.. keep looking..u'll find her..

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Nia Riz 12 December 2008

nice poem dave.....some day you will find her...heh.... <3, Nia

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