I Can'T See Her Cry Poem by Mr. M Jamal

I Can'T See Her Cry



I cant't see her cry
For when she cries
All the happiness in the world
Seems lost
Every cherished moment on face of earth
Gone aghast!
I can't see her cry
For when she sheds tears
Flower on the mountain of hope
Wither away in arid winds of sorrow
Seas flowing smooth on waves placid
Become wraith of disastrous Morrow
I can't see her sob
For her sobbing is death to my heart
Searing pain writhing me all along
Helpless, bereaving me of a harmonious console
Cather-tic this emotional cajole
So strong is my feeling for her
I can't watch her disturbed
I just can't her wasting herself dire
Over a wanton matter
Leaving me on twisting roads
Full of thorns, tantalizing barnacles
Serene is her happiness to me
I can't see her cry
I just can't see her cry...

Thursday, May 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My first attempt at Prose Poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samreena Lodhi 27 July 2016

Splendid. words with depth.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 June 2015

Simply Beautiful... Each lines shows the caring heart.. Beautiful words flowing softly for someone you care in heart.

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Mr. M Jamal 02 June 2015

Bus Geetha g. Kisi ku yaad kar main nay yeh kavita likh de. :) Aur us ki shaadi tay ho gaye: (Sadly. Anyways Dhanewaad :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 May 2015

Gone aghast! . Gone with the wind of life. Nice piece of work.

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Mr. M Jamal 21 May 2015

Thank you Sir :) For your worthy reflection upon my poetry. I am honored :)

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Grace Burke 21 May 2015

very moving shows you are a very caring person

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Mr. M Jamal 21 May 2015

Thank you Grace :) For such encouraging words :) Yes, I do care about those I love :)

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