I Can'T Say Poem by Neela Nath Das

I Can'T Say

Rating: 5.0


It's not the right time
to awake, 'cause I need
some rest to stay in peace.
I closed all windows
to shun sound and the fury,
to stop breaking mind in piece.
I can't say any word amorous,
it's not the time to crack
jokes and make any fun.
My duties and responsibilities
have turned my face homeward.
I must do those things undone.

Wednesday, November 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 03 December 2014

A lovely thoughtful poem.........10

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 November 2014

Beautiful poem with its responsible identity- there is so much beyond that- I can't say any word amorous, nice poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2014

to stop breaking mind in piece. I can't say any word amorous, - very nicely penning. I like this. Many thanks.

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Ramesh Rai 19 November 2014

Your poem of 12 lines says a lot where you say, I can't say. In fact we all arre revolving on the orbit of our karma which can not be ignored and circumstance makes us to say and do. A very deep write with malignant emotion n feelings delivering true value of life.

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Mohammad Skati 19 November 2014

It's all a wonderful and great poem of poetess Neela Nath with true feelings and emotions. Thanks.

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