RUBAB ATWAL


I Can See - Poem by RUBAB ATWAL

I can see myself beaming with exhilaration
today every cloud has a silver lining
every tree and leaf is whimsical
but yesterday was another day I spent
in a pretty different way
sadness made me it's prey
my face was devoid of happiness
as I got swindled with the world of anguish.
Every person can change
any minute any second
as life is a game
being playful is the best.


Comments about I Can See by RUBAB ATWAL

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (12/30/2013 11:04:00 PM)

    the message that you gave in this poem was a simple one, , , but the way you expressed your feelings was astonishing, , , each line marks the attention of readers in the poem, , , wonderfully fabricated
    I can see myself beaming with exhilaration
    today every cloud has a silver lining
    every tree and leaf is whimsical
    but yesterday was another day I spent

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  • Gold Star - 29,772 Points Roseann Shawiak (12/11/2013 12:28:00 AM)

    Enjoyed this poem. It depicts life from both sides, happiness and sorrow. There's always a silver lining even in storm clouds, we learn from each new experience how to deal with life in the future. Thank you for your wonderful comment on my poem: Eighth And Ninth Dimension, totally appreciate it,
    glad you liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,704 Points Valsa George (12/8/2013 10:26:00 AM)

    Another beautiful write! Each day has its share of joys and sorrows! On certain days, we will be overwhelmed with happiness, yet another day may see us in deep sorrow or moody in spirit and lacking in cheer! Such erratic changes are so natural! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/4/2013 12:44:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem Rubab. Everything changes in no time. As you said being playful is the best. Taken lightly is the best. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,910 Points Dave Walker (12/3/2013 10:53:00 AM)

    A great poem, we have good days and bad days,
    we should make the most of them all, and try make
    the bad days a little better. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,896 Points Gajanan Mishra (12/3/2013 10:51:00 AM)

    every person can change, very good write, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 3, 2013


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