I Bring The Fire Of Hell Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

I Bring The Fire Of Hell

Rating: 5.0


I bring the fire of hell
To light your way
If love is not enough
I bring more poisonous wishes
To cover this wound

I bring the ice of Himalaya
To hug your chance
If hate is not enough
I bring more sweet dreams
To heal this greed

I bring the wave of Bermuda
To hold your surrender
If gold is not enough
I bring more stones of jealousy
To paint this anger

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Mr. Robert Creeley)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 16 September 2009

You bring so many good things to satisfy one individual.

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Merna Ibrahim 16 September 2009

Attractive and remarkable title to a good poem! ! Thanks...Merna

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Surya . 16 September 2009

nice ideas and nice poem.thanx for invitation. voted10 surya

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Carol Gall 17 September 2009

very good poem 10........

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Mubeen Sadhika 17 September 2009

Amazing expression. Deep thinking expressed in simple, beautiful words.

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Ruerd Visser 24 September 2009

Wow you wake em you shake em and you take them away! Boomwhisperer Ruerd

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Joseph Poewhit 23 September 2009

Touches on powerful emotions HATE and JEALOUSY

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Antonio Liao 22 September 2009

wow! like a great warrior of the ancient poet of Hellenistic epoch.....so wonderful, target the oracle of time, the fantastic contrast salutute my heart to remember you in my poetry.... a style that capture my deep thought of wisdom of what is the inner sactrum of being a poet.....thank you and more power my friend.... you’re a great poet. God bless you...a 10 +++++

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Marieta Maglas 21 September 2009

nice surrealistic poem, well written, lovely to read..........10+++++

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Kuji Soliman 21 September 2009

WOW! ! this poem is great! i loved it....but i wanted to know...what exactly did you feel when writting this poem, anger of sadness?

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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