I Bow My Head Poem by ramesh rai

I Bow My Head

Rating: 4.4


I bow my head
not before the High Command
of any politics and religion
but before the people who
despite of tremendous labor throughout the day
earn little money to feed the family
take dry bread with cold water
and be ready for job next day.

I bow my head before those
who curtail food and milk of their kids
offer to the rivers, at the root of trees
feed the insects and creatures
to worship the nature

I bow my head before the tattered and
hungry people, engaged in chanting and worshiping
it is due to the divine endurance & worship to nature
prosperity dwells in this land.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rizvana Parveen 02 February 2012

good composition......

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 02 February 2012

I bow my head to you my friend for this beautiful write....

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Elena Sandu 03 February 2012

Beautiful write, I shall join you, thank you!

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Rizvana Parveen 02 February 2012

good composition......

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Renu Kakkar 13 February 2012

great poem..showing consideration for fellow mankind

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Vipins Puthooran 08 February 2012

I'll not bow my head for I'm one of them/ It's really a great poem//top marks! ! !

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Keith Chapman 05 February 2012

beautiful sentiment we all should be so humble

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Rekha Mandagere 04 February 2012

I too join you my friend to find greatness of life. Great write. I must give 10+

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Lilian Chromious Eveson 03 February 2012

Nicely written and wisely composed.

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