I Bet Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Bet

Rating: 5.0


I bet

I bet
And confidently state
Not even moon can compare
Or else can dare

She has elegance
And fragrance
Of fresh flower
Petals may feel shier

Some people are praiseworthy
Only for their beauty
It seems that god has taken enough of time
To shape and bring in lovely features but not to name

She may be kind
And mild too
With eyes down
Her real face remains unknown

But let her feature remain intact
And world see in fact
She may be wedded to lucky man on earth
And she too may keep on the relation till last breathe

I Bet
Saturday, August 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Sriranji Aratisankar 20 August 2016

Really enjoyable.. I think she as depicted in your poem is the representative of primordial nature...10 for you...

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