Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 10,468 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

I Beg Her For Forgiveness..... [personal; Short; Marriage; Humor? ] - Poem by Bri Edwards

I beg her for forgiveness, for what I did (when she wasn’t lookin’) .
I beg her for forgiveness, or I won’t get, tonight, home cookin’.

I beg her for forgiveness, though my wrongs are ONLY.. in her mind.
I beg her for forgiveness, ... or another home I’ll have to find.

(August 2013)


Poet's Notes about The Poem

there's something about marriage that gives me topics like this to write about. :) : (

UPDATE: gee! i just got a comment on this which sounds as though i've been misinterpreted (my poem has i mean) .: (let me make this clear! ! ! i have not indulged in 'infidelity'! though it IS tempting. ha ha :)

Comments about I Beg Her For Forgiveness..... [personal; Short; Marriage; Humor? ] by Bri Edwards

  • Veteran Poet - 1,930 Points Noreen Carden (11/26/2013 2:49:00 AM)

    Hey Bri i have a feeling you spend a lot of time begging for forgiveness very bad boy
    i liked the poem (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (11/23/2013 1:13:00 PM)

    Hahaha very wise in forgiving her at the right time. I enjoyed your great humour in your brilliant lines. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,272 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/21/2013 12:54:00 PM)

    Ha ha u r jus humoring infidelity here. Well u entertain us well. Enjoyd readin (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,800 Points Paul Brookes (11/21/2013 11:51:00 AM)

    Nice one I hope you get a good home cooked meal and you are now in the good books BB : O) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (11/21/2013 8:51:00 AM)

    hope she forgives you, , , (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 21, 2013


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