I Ask The Moon Poem by ramesh rai

I Ask The Moon

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what made a scar on you?

Is it the wound given to you
or any sign of betrayal
that you are suffering still.

I ask the moon
why do you come daily
with your changing faces

Every fortnight makes you delightful
still murk follows on you
to make your life full of obscurity.

War between light and darkness
goes on you, every night comes
challenging to you.

Throughout life
you suffer loss of life
yet you regain a glowing life.

I ask the moon
the manifoldness of life
the moon faces
at every moment of life.

Life is perhaps a dreadful channel
in which water of love, emotion
hatred, win and defeat flows
subsequently each wave
touches the shore.

I ask the moon
why does the cloud covers you
but your love is so passionate
you try every moment
to peep beneath the sky.

I ask the moon
what makes you so glowing
is it the reflection of your soul
that reaches the buttom of ocean
and makes you so glowing
or the reflection of you
wanna kiss the earth.

I ask the moon
your face is so resplendent
then why a spot in your face
is it the aspersion
since you beguiled Ahilya.

But you are indeed
a great amorist
that so every loving guy
makes confession of you.

The warmth of your love
penetrate the soul
mesmerize a precluded mind
where cupid arrow is futile.

I ask the moon
why you are so cool?
when the entire creation sleep
you whisper the loving guys
to interact their soul
for creation of a new life.

You are indeed a great sinner
do not hesitate to witness
coition of all loving pairs
in your moonlit night.

I ask the moon
you are the symbol of intellect
that so, the poet creates
in your moonlit night.

I ask the moon
you are very romantic
gaze all the buds
before getting it bloomed
kiss their throats
throughout moonlit night.

I ask the moon
about his splendrous achievement
He says with his cute smile
He assists the creator
in his divine creation.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 07 December 2013

throughout moonlit night, good write, thanks. I like it.

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Muhammad Ali 21 January 2014

a poem of night world. a poem of ages. a poem of teenage. very nice poem and very nice is the answer of the moon.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 December 2013

Beautifully developed and narrated. Moon is put on the spot by pointed interrogation. At some point moon will reveal some secret that is not known. Great poem. Thank you.

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Shahzia Batool 11 December 2013

Talking to the moon or any natural object is a very poetic gesture, there might be many reasons for this, like, imaginative impulse, apostrophizing impulse that leads to invite the cold world object to chat like this, loneliness in the human society, not escapism but an attempt to escape, or to see them as a manifestation of the Divine creation, to become all praise for the CREATOR who created such flawless universe....the mystic approach in which they dont talk to God directly rather they go to Creator by the channel of His creation...very lively conversation though the moon is mostly silent except the cute smile...and one more thing, you gave the male gender to the moon, perhaps in our side of the world moon is male gender as in our language Chaan nikalta he, nikalti nhi he, but if we go to Keats, he says: ...goddess moon is on her throne clustered around by all her starry fays... the nightingale ode...the poem is a decorated piece of imagination!

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Ambrosia A 08 December 2013

What an intellectual write, yet full of intense emotions. only poets can talk to moon, since they know each others language. Thanks for decoding your conversation and for sharing it your fellow poets. Great 10++ from my side.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 December 2013

A beautiful write on moon. Loved reading it.

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