*i Am Waiting Poem by Bob Blackwell
*i Am Waiting
Like a fruit ripening,
a nut within its shell,
A cocoon that holds a butterfly,
for a chest, a box, a
door which holds the key;
to open flood gates of
a dam that holds, all the
unused reservoir of love,
for caring in this world.
09-10-2008
The imagery you used here Bob is vivid and meaningful. Making us all want that waiting attitude, because like you I am sure it will come, it will 'cover the earth as the waters cover the very sea' - all we need as we wait is faith and hope.A beautiful short piece.
Some fine metaphors fill this poem about transformation. There is a personal dimension to this heartfelt piece too, methinks. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
the fruit is full of promise the nut yet to be born the chrysalis confines the butterfly with a key who's lock is worn the flood gates they will open with a downpour from above God decides our readiness when we fill this world with love another clasicc Bob! your a treasue
I am waiting........yet let the love gushes out and pour on those in the world suffers and relief their pains.....love is a reservoir........really a poem of thought.......
waiting, waiting, like a volcano about to explode...with love! ! !
! Unleash it Bob! on this old world feelings, untold love unfurled the greatest gift we all possess is an act of love, that is our best
a pleasure to read.You good heart shines. Love this Hugs, Meggie
There is some goodness in the world, but sometimes it doesn't seem that way, a lovely poem Bob full of imagery and hope, Well said, 10 Lynda xx
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fine indeed! .......nice comparison........10+