I Am Still Tongue-Tied...! ! ...! ! ! ... Poem by Neha Aradhye

I Am Still Tongue-Tied...! ! ...! ! ! ...

Rating: 4.8


I'll walk with u for over miles and miles,
& adorn our relationship wit unparalleled-unlike lifestyles..

Drizzle my love on YOU - who is a grandeur,
because YOU signify the strings that are paired in courses in a guitar..

You'll always be my prerogative,
MY sweet-hearten, soft-hearten festive...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 01 December 2008

ohhhh thats so cute so sweet really a cute poem.....

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 December 2008

Your love............i love the music in you.........artistic!

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Reshma Ramesh 01 December 2008

nice love poem there........well penned! !

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Joseph Poewhit 01 December 2008

'Drizzle my love on you' - BREATHLESS

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rohit sapra 01 December 2008

This poem displays a well made creation done through very good usage of words which reflects lot of creativity.

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Yaseen Anwer 12 December 2008

Dear u rock with dis master piece very small and very deep well constructed deserve 10 on10... Regards Yas

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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

A very beautiful romantic poem. Y get 10++...........

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premji premji 04 December 2008

nehaa, beautiful lines... loveeeeeeeeeee! 0***********

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Sathyanarayana M V S 02 December 2008

Nicely romantic. But needs to be properly structured and pruned at places...........8

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Deependra Kumar Jha 02 December 2008

Lovely feelings! I admire your commitment and passion..and I do hope that you will be able to walk for 'over miles and miles' in Love.

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