Treasure Island

Geetha Jayakumar

(Kerala Palakkad)

I am Sorry, a dedication to PH!


Sorry is the only word that comes from my heart today
For any hurting words or any misunderstandings
Came from my poems or words.
From my heart I can never curse any one
As I have only love and respect for you all.
I remember we had a great time together.
But today you feel I have changed a lot
Today you feel my ego speaking in my words.
May be you are right in judging me.
Never ever I thought a day
Will come like this in my entire life.
Still I remember all those days
Where you shared my pain and joys.
I don't know today whether I am
There in you heart or I am
In your hatred words.
Like everyday morning sunlight
Each of you are there in my heart.
I can never forget anyone of you
As your each words of respect, love and courage
Still rules my heart.
Sorry, is the word Comes from my heart.
I never ever did anything to rise to any popularity level.
Only My love for writing poems brought me here.
My many poems were purely
My imagination, not meant especially for anyone.
Yes my poems did hurt you
And brought a misunderstanding in you.
Which I realized it too late.
So today, you are too far away from me.
Yes, I do recollect your each words of
Encouragement did made me to come up
With new poems.
I want to thank each one of you
For your sincere comments and valuable suggestion did bring
a change in my writings a lot.
I appreciate every one of you.
May God Bless each one you to encourage
To lend a encouraging words to
Each new comer, whoever come
On your way.
Yes, you all did a lot for me
Which I will never forget.
Thank you for all the words
That came sincerely from your heart for me, once.
Thanks a lot!


For the time being, I wont be coming with new poems
Nor I may be able to comment on your poems.
Thanks a lot!

Submitted: Friday, September 27, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 27, 2013

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  • Heather Wilkins (10/18/2013 2:37:00 PM)

    dear Geetha there will be times when we are spoken to harshly.. I have been there. But it is all right. Everyone has his own opinion. As a poet we must be dedicated to our craft. As a young writer I entered a poetry contest. It was a disaster I quickly learned from that experience that I had to have a tough exterior. Keep writing your poetry and expressing yourself. happy writing (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (10/13/2013 8:08:00 AM)

    to be a poet is a blessing of god. it is not within you n me. unless god inspires you you can not compose even a single line
    I cordially invite you to read and vote for my poem. My link is below -
    http: //www.poemhunter.com/contest-vote/i-searched-you/
    regards
    ramesh rai (Report) Reply

  • marvin brato (10/10/2013 4:22:00 AM)

    Well, there come a time when we feel down and sorry, but as poet we are meant to be always sharing sentiments which we only can vividly express, you may rest but you can not stop expressing! (Report) Reply

  • Harindhar Reddy (10/9/2013 4:06:00 AM)

    Agony is in yr heart and beauty is in these lines. Remarkable write!
    I don't know today whether I am
    There in you heart or I am
    In your hatred words. (Report) Reply

  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (10/7/2013 8:57:00 AM)

    Why this valedictory speech? We writers are bound to express freely not to hurt any one but to correct if needed.As Aristotle said we must instruct and delight.To Dryden we are teachers too.This is what William Wordsworth did.All prophets did.Express frankly, Oneday it will be recognized.This was the spirit of? Swami Vivekananda.I expect more feminist views on society from you. (Report) Reply

  • Yasmeen Khan (9/30/2013 1:44:00 PM)

    Lines written by a sensitive heart with a sad message....a poet can never plan about his/her poetry....it springs from the heart like a fountain so I'm sure a nice new write will soon come up Gheetha ji. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2013 6:23:00 AM)

    rightly said so....10

    Find some excerpts.from my poem... Poem must reveal

    You are not hurting any one
    They are hurting rather everyone
    they have one trump card for reaching number one
    they will bring from no where and put as number one (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . (9/30/2013 1:38:00 AM)

    I think I can link your feelings as to the reason for coming up with such a poem....but Geetha, only one thing I can say is and agree with Valsa Mam, that take any criticism or any hurting comments sportingly and positively as this only helps us to grow and accept this as a challenge and prove to the world that our critic was wrong and we can do better. All the best and hoping to see you back soon! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/29/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    I do not see any reason to get discouraged and write a 'sorry' poem. Your poems always showed a positive enthusiasm, creative imagination, and fresh look into day to day activities. Readers liked your poems. I agree with poets Valsa George and Tribhuvan Kaul. Take the positive and remove the negative and resolve to continue. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (9/29/2013 6:33:00 AM)

    Why Geetha, why have you come with such a poem of apology? What is there to feel sorry about? I don't understand what makes you feel dejected and why you have decided not to post any new poems. Even if there has been any personal or private criticism, take it in a sportive spirit. I feel that you are a person, so open and no one has any serious grudge for you! I fully agree with what Mr. Tribhawan Kaul has expressed! So cheer up! (Report) Reply

  • Tribhawan Kaul (9/29/2013 1:55:00 AM)

    I don't think you should feel sorry. Every one has his/her style of writing. Direct or indirect. Poem has to convey its meaning. Grammatical mistakes do occur but that can be fine tuned by reading over a written poem time and again before posting. Never get discouraged by comments as never expect positive comments always. Be ready to face a critique if you want to be a good poet. Never run away. Stand on your own ground./TK (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (9/27/2013 9:59:00 PM)

    Why you say sorry? I dont think u hurting anybody here. you just doing your favorite work so dont bothered if people dont like you because of this...i like your poems. please dont be sad okay? Just keep on writing an be happy...Free yourself from attached to people opinion because you did nothing wrong..more positive needed now_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (9/27/2013 3:27:00 PM)

    No, no, no! ! ! ! I am here waiting for your poems. I like it too much.
    Do not let anything or anyone stop you from writing. Do not give up because that happens all the time.
    Misunderstandings! ! Can not stop a poet to express yourself. if so i would not write anymore! !
    I Like many of your poems and hope to have the freedom to read them at any time.
    Specially the new ones! ! ! A big kiss to you Poetess! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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