I Am Someone Poem by shilpa Poetess

I Am Someone

Rating: 5.0


I am someone
I walked past a dead face
even though the person was alive
I saw my eyes in the mirror
and cried at the sight
I looked at a person I didn¹t know
and I met a friend
I got heads to turn
when I walked past
I learned a lot about myself
when I lost a new friend
I cried every tear in my body
when I thought about love
I got hit bad
then got back in the ring
I climbed a mountain of rocks
and saw an eagle fly over- head
I heard terrible things about myself
when no one thought I was listening
I realized I was strong
when I didn¹t cry when it hurt
I found out who I was
when I was with someone else
I thought I was lost forever
when a friend found me
I held a life in my hand
and it was my own
I was a pawn in someone else's game
so I surrendered to a brook
I walked the fine line between surviving
and not wanting to survive
I still am
I am someone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddharth Singh 02 September 2009

An endearing potrayal of one's journey through life.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 June 2009

Lovely composition

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Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

emotions as well as feelings are so blended one can feel your lovely piece..breathing all through, realistic..10++

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R.k Das 10 June 2009

this poem emphatically declares the presence of a person who journeies thorough teh thick and thin of life, , , , and, , , 'I still am, I am someone' tremendous positive energey to live and fight teh hurdles, thanx

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