I Am Novice Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Am Novice

Rating: 4.9


Pardon me for being novice,
Have no choice and no device,
Can you just render simple an advice,
It Will only add and need to suffice?

Will she be listening?
More she be confusing,
Might not but also be refusing,
And not try for it defusing?

Why a curse on simple luck?
Why to sit as just lame duck?
May I just make the voice mute?
And not just pass and refute,

Have just simple and only belief,
God may give, bless and relief,
May be some amiss and even emiss,
But for sure, will there be miss,

Oh, my friends, do never a curse,
heal my wounds and act as nurse,
'Harm might have been' as you may think,
'Warm and no harm” as you may blink,

'Let anything people may say,
'I will continue to have my sway,
Far and distance, you may be away,
'Come what may', we may meet in May,

I may just cherish,
Even if am to just perish,
Will it be before I may finish?
May look it like mere a punish,

Forgive me not for being novice,
As I didn’t head just to your advice,
I may try not just to improvise,
But am so happy for being novice,

I found you perfect,
This is simple and bare fact,
Neither It is ploy nor any tact,
It is simple wish and noble act,


I may not sit and remain quite,
Days may be happy so also night,
Path so chosen may prove right,
End result good that too without fight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kunwar Patel 09 August 2009

to confess is great quality....10

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Radha Seth 09 August 2009

i am unaware of the things....10

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Saroj Davde 09 August 2009

unaware of real things of life....10

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Suwarna Patil 10 August 2009

one should admit own seakneses....10

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Jigisha Vyas 10 August 2009

telling truth is always good...10

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Darshna Chopra 18 October 2009

Will she be listening? More she be confusing, Might not but also be refusing

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Sachin Goswami 17 October 2009

Pardon me for being novice, Have no choice and no device, Can you just render simple an advice

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Ashley Paul 16 September 2009

Pardon me for being novice, Have no choice and no device, Can you just render simple an advice, It Will only add and need to suffice?

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Chetna Purohit 16 September 2009

Pardon me for being novice, Have no choice and no device, Can you just render simple an advice, It Will only add and need to suffice?

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Reshma Punjabi 04 September 2009

Pardon me for being novice, Have no choice and no device, Can you just render simple an advice, .....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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