I Am Darkness, I Am Sin. Poem by Bree Swart

I Am Darkness, I Am Sin.

Rating: 4.5


I am darkness,
I am sin,
I am where,
The fun begins.

So walk with me,
Take my hand,
Let me show you around,
This sorrow land.

Don't be afraid,
I know it all too well,
For once you get used to it,
You will also have a sad tale to tell.

So come on,
Don't be afraid,
There's not a minute to loose,
We must join this sorrow parade.

Take your place,
You will fit in just fine,
Stay with me,
And you will be mine.

We can do everything together,
I will always be by your side,
You don't have to show your face,
You can always hide.

I will still love you,
As long as you do me proud,
Just slit your wrists,
I promise you're allowed.

I will help you get the blade,
I will help you kick the chair,
Just call on me,
And I will always be there.

I am darkness,
I am sin,
I am your beginning,
I am your end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tj Becker 24 September 2008

Very good rhyme but somewhere along the line you lost the flow. The poem was really good and your imagination is terrific. Over all a great poem

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Naé Tyler 24 September 2008

Whoa, this is deep & dark, I really love it. It portrays the imagery perfectly, I'm like, in awe. Grand.

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