I Am A Solid Insoluble Insane Poem by Vishal Sharma

I Am A Solid Insoluble Insane

Rating: 5.0


Do you all know my deeds?
yeah, perhaps but you all know my name,
do you know I am insane, solid and insoluble,
great! Now listen to me and judge then,
do you think I am a fool talented
the one who is always floating in words,
yes, I am, I am so, and a very rude genius,
I love someone, by heart but madly, a sin?
do you rather think me a child, think me insane,
I have guts, they are terrible and rude,
I want water over my fire, broke out into my heart,
and really, the secret chamber burned, made me insane
and I think, my world is a cage with a parrot,
and with whom I can talk to enchant strains.
my luck is dull and dirty and gives rather pain
that has made me a solid insoluble insane.

Tuesday, June 25, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

hi my friend nice, very nice i enjoyed it good luck

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Unwritten Soul 26 June 2013

You know, to harvest gold we need to get dirty places, and dirt on your shirts..so if you are the gold, be the polish one, maybe you are from bad place but you can change it to be better one...so what what you have now, do something that you can make something more, if you can do a little create something bigger...young is your time, so lot of chances you will earn...thus, never look back just go and do the best as you can...and humble is the best :) _Soul

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Jenie Franksay 26 June 2013

ummm... its good... but you write much better than this. not your best but good.

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Bri Edwards 26 June 2013

i was requested to read the poet's 3 latest poems, but he did not say which are the three latest, so i just start at the top of the list. yes, insane perhaps. perhaps not? i DON'T say well spoken as the last person did, as i don't understand the poem after one reading which is all the time i have for it. but thanks, i think, for sharing anyway. i THINK i would write some lines differently such as the line: and with whom I can talk to enchant strains.

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Sandra Kelley 25 June 2013

well spoken! very well spoken

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