adil khan

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I am a simple boy


I am a simple boy
i am not a prince
i am not a king
i have not any attractive thing
to gives you joy
i am a simple boy
I don't know
how can say
i dont know
the talking way
people laughed at me
i am a joke
i am a simple boy
who dont smoke
I am a simple boy
but i have some dreams
which is too higher
& i have a strong desire

my desire is not so week
& i know that
one day this simple thing
are made unique

Submitted: Saturday, December 16, 2006
Edited: Thursday, December 09, 2010

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  • Silver Star - 4,085 Points Hazel Durham (3/3/2013 12:21:00 PM)

    Fresh, humble and very interesting about a boy that stands out for telling it as it is and in knowing we are all unique! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Priya Gupta (1/13/2012 7:18:00 AM)

    unique poem... nice one... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 312 Points Indira Renganathan (6/8/2009 1:19:00 AM)

    Simply interesting10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ayesha Ahmad (6/25/2007 12:50:00 PM)

    aaaaaaawwwwwwwwww
    ur poem tells me a lot about you
    your a great person and a simple boy
    hahaha
    anyway look out for my poems im going to add some soon promise
    take care
    xxxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sheikh Hina Yasmeen (4/10/2007 9:49:00 AM)

    very nice, Adil. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pia Andersson (3/25/2007 2:10:00 PM)

    I like your poem a lot..anyone who has a mind like yours will be seen and listen to. Dont worry Wishing you a day full of joy-Pia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aliyah Al-Sharji (3/21/2007 4:30:00 PM)

    good poem well done ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie *Aishwarya. P* (2/24/2007 9:16:00 PM)

    Yes u are right that small things make some day unique (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zana Gg (2/19/2007 12:31:00 PM)

    heyy i love this poem.....
    everyone is unique on their special ways
    i love your poetry
    hugs
    zana (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Melvina Germain (2/13/2007 12:37:00 AM)

    Excellent write, no one has the right to laugh at, points fingers, or taunt in any way. Everyone has a right to a safe and pleasant life. Having said that, the one that points fingers, makes fun of, they are the simple ones and one can only feel pity for such people.---Melvina--- (Report) Reply

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