My mother is the mountain
Sweet ether is her breath
Born of words unspoken
Was I, in tenderness
I know not where I am
Nor what I'm meant to be
I cannot comprehend
I am a mystery
In these eight short sweet lines, I believe you have solved The Mystery........
This poem though concise holds such a veritable truth! With all technological and scientific advancements, man and this universe remain still a great mystery! Much remains outside the periphery of our limited comprehension!
And I am your twin. A probing, deep and insightful write. Some things we cannot know. Brief and sincere
Wow! This is simply beautiful. Quite a talented quill you've got there. An amazingly fluid and relevant write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.