I Am A Mystery Poem by Valerie Dohren

I Am A Mystery

Rating: 4.9


My mother is the mountain
Sweet ether is her breath
Born of words unspoken
Was I, in tenderness

I know not where I am
Nor what I'm meant to be
I cannot comprehend
I am a mystery

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wahab Abdul 07 February 2012

What a nice poem is it! Nice words have been used in the poem. The quality of the poem is in its flow, the texture of the poem is knitted well, the theme is fantastic, a very good image has been created.The another quality of the poem is its mystic music. It is a great poem.I like the poem; I enjoyed it while reading. I am giving you 100/100..Keep it up. And at last I like to thank you for sharing this superb poem among us.

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G.R. Gaus 02 April 2012

In these eight short sweet lines, I believe you have solved The Mystery........

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Melissa Carey 11 April 2012

So beautiful. Really enjoying your work!

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Sandra Feldman 04 August 2013

Feel the same way, you said it soo well

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Valsa George 07 December 2012

This poem though concise holds such a veritable truth! With all technological and scientific advancements, man and this universe remain still a great mystery! Much remains outside the periphery of our limited comprehension!

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Josh Dinkin 21 October 2012

fantastic. it reminds me of dickinson.

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Joseph Anderson 14 July 2012

And I am your twin. A probing, deep and insightful write. Some things we cannot know. Brief and sincere

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Richard D. Remler 13 April 2012

Wow! This is simply beautiful. Quite a talented quill you've got there. An amazingly fluid and relevant write.

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