I Am A Dream Cage Poem by Aftab Alam

I Am A Dream Cage

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I am a dream cage
With the wings of soul,
Dream flies,
‘Tis an internal phenomenon,
Yet seems to come in, through eyes,

What life, a blank page,
Inked by the hidden sage,
With dream it rise,
Act of sublime and wise,

Dream must not be an ice that melts,
Dream should be water to be frozen into ice,
Dream, the life's foot step; an indicating machine,
Be cool, keep patience, be nice.

Friday, August 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 15 August 2014

Thoughtful write. Very true said, Dream must not be an ice that melts, Dream should be water to be frozen into ice, Dream should make one stronger like ice but cool and patient as well. Thanks for sharing the valuable thoughts.

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Valsa George 18 August 2014

It is dreams that keep life afloat even when storms rage in life! So let us keep dreaming without allowing the dreams to melt away! Enjoyed! !

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Heather Wilkins 16 August 2014

a beautiful poem featuring lovely lines. someday lie will end but dreams can come true

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Md Asadullah 15 August 2014

One day Life will end but dreams will never end, nice poem, thanks for sharing :)

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Neela Nath Das 15 August 2014

Dream should be materialized.A beautiful profound poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 15 August 2014

Dream must not be an ice that melts, Dream should be water to be frozen into ice, Lovely lines.

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