I Am Poem by tanvi damle
I Am
I sit in the terrace, gazing at the starry sky,
and think about the answer to the question, 'Who am I? '
I am a girl who wants to be young forever,
but I'm a girl who also wants to grow up and be someone that everyone will remember.
I'm a girl who wants to stay in the protected world my parents have built for me,
but I'm also a girl who wants to touch the sky and break free.
I want to be happy and dance in the rain,
but I also wanna cry for the unfortunate and feel their pain.
I want to be wise and go towards the sun ray,
but i also want to be a fool, trust my heart and go the other way.
I'm a girl who always wants her life to go towards light,
but I'm also a girl who wants to be able to make it through the night.
I always want to be right, win every race,
but i also want to be able to lose and accept it with grace.
I'm a girl who always wants to go up, make ends meet,
but I'm also a girl who wants to be able to fall down and have the courage to get back on my feet.
Who am I? What kind of a human being?
I'm right, I'm wrong, I'm everything.
very nyc poem...very well depictin a mind f a teenagr...who develops his/her own aspirations, way of lyf...bt is new to the wrldly challnges and wnders wht is ryt..
very good.which question u asked in the poem is not only for girl or women, it is for all.
A SUPERB LYRIC THAT CARRIES THE NOT-EASILY-RECOUNCIALATORY-LONGING AND THEREFORE A PERPETUAL ANXIETY OVER D LURKING FEAR OF FAILURES..though a simple n moving song, bt it also contains d philosophical dichotomy of life..the constant scuffle betwn DREAMS AND REALITY..the poetess has successfully make a sincere attempt to strike a fine balance betwn d biggest gaps in life: WHAT WE R AND WHAT WE DESIRED TO BE- -AN ETERNAL PARADOX OF LIFE...SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL AND BEAUTIFULLY SIMPLE! ..THE POETESS RIGHTLY DESERVE ACCOLADES..best of luck!
Hi Tanvi, Fantastic poem. I could easily relate to your dreams. I find a young- forever young, young at heart-, dreaming, starry eyed girl, always exuberant and happy, in the poem. And yes, a very sturdy, strong person who does not get scared by the possibility of falling down, erring.. Tanvi, we fall, only when when we get up and start walking. But do not hesitate to get up and walk, no run, to your cherished destination. This is something every human being should do. Because, this is what every animal, plant do in the nature around you. Strongly reminding me of 'Jonathan Livingstone Seagull. All the best.
Hey Tanvi Its been ages, How you doing, I have a lot of catching up to do reading your wonderful poetry..you haven't lost it sweetie you are marvellous never stop writing :)
A great poem is this one, i give a ten.... i like the rhyme in it
Yes indeed...you're everything. And after reading this i didn't felt like you were not in touch with poems for a long time like you said to me. It's really a beautiful one..you just weaved a wonderful poem here...Questions sor which we all seek answers. Take care.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Powerful statements in verse..Great insight.....a fine piece of poetry...10+++