I Poem by Amitava Sur

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Rating: 5.0


You remain in my heart
In the deepest of the deep,
Your presence is
In my whole existence of being.
Not only do you remain inside of me
But in my exterior and periphery too.

You remain in my “I “
And I am none but a you.
Whatever I am
Is only because of you.
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Amitava (29.5.2015) 6-00 am


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Sunday, May 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: realization
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 04 June 2015

Lovely poem Amitav. The highest possible emotion for some one being in love.

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Kavya . 03 June 2015

wonderful ode to love....its pure, it knows no boundaries, such is Love. well said

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Jak Black 01 June 2015

A worthy tribute to love, in its purest form. The feeling of attachment and respect that never fades.

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Roseann Shawiak 01 June 2015

Amitava, this poem is extraordinary! Your love knows no bounds or limits - it is pure, raw emotion you have placed in this poem. Stemming right from the heart of your being! Fantastic portrayal of true love, lasting even beyond life and within your heart only. If every woman could be so lucky, what a peaceful and fulfilling life it would be. I will give you 10 -10's if possible! Thank you for this glimpse at what true love is made of, Amitava. RoseAnn

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