Hush Little Baby Its Alright.(Religous/Sad) Poem by Poet of the River

Hush Little Baby Its Alright.(Religous/Sad)

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hush little baby,
pleas don't cry,
god has a place for you,
up in the sky,
I need you to be strong,
you can make it if you just try,
you will fly on the wings of an angle,
I am so sorry you are having to say good bye,
if their was a way to save you,
you know I would,
I stayed with you when you cried,
I prayed with you when the doctor said he did all he could do,
I want you to know how much i will miss you.
I wish you didn't have to go,
I wish I could take your place,
and that you could stay,
and live a full life,
I wish I knew what to say,
just follow the angles honey,
they will show you the way.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 01 December 2011

I like this one its very melancholic, and bittersweet, I like that you took the old nursery rhyme, its very dark subject matter, and I like the boldness of what you are saying with grit and warmth. Great work Ashleigh

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