Husband Poem by Donna Saphier

Husband

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Where did you go
When you left that day
Do you know I'm still crying
Do you know I still pray
The last words you said
Were please hold my hand
Then what happened next
I just don't understand
You just went to sleep
But where did you go
I've been crying and waiting
And missing you so
You weren't ready to go
I remember you said
That it's gonna be years
Before you were dead
We had plans for our future
We had plans for today
I still can't believe
That you've gone away
I miss you each minute
Of everyday
Are you not allowed back
If I ask and I pray
I'll forget about my future
I'll live in the past
And then my dear husband
Forever we'll last
I love you so much
I would give up my life
Then we'll always remain
Husband and wife x

Friday, May 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I dedicate this to my dear husband xx
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 08 September 2019

Very heartfelt with touching expressions. Deep feelings passionately brought forth with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing.

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Donna Saphier 11 January 2017

Thank-you for reading xx 😋

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Elena Plotkin 06 May 2014

I'm truly sorry for your loss. Your poem is both great and heart-wrenching. When you spend a lifetime building dreams together it's scary and tough to start dreaming alone. However, living in the past no matter how great it may seem is like being the living dead. To truly live one has to look to the future. You'll get there one day and your husband's memory will not suffer when you do. God Bless and keep writing. You are truly talented.

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Suburban Lovechild 05 May 2014

Yes, very heartfelt, emotion dripping on every line...

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Valerie Dohren 02 May 2014

Lost my husband too 8 months ago, so can very much relate. Sad and heartfelt poem.

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