Hurt No More Poem by Kristen Otto

Hurt No More



Hurt no more that is all I ask
In so much pain will this ever pass.
Fading away until it is over
Wanting a helping hand to make this stop
Take me Now I beg.
I can't handle this kind of torture.
Will it end now?
Even if it does I know it will just come back
It never ends this kind of pain
Make it stop make me free of this
HURT
...

No More.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harlan Simantel 09 March 2008

I strongly identify with your poem. I have a hurt from 23 years ago that refuses to go away. Pain of the heart is the worst hurt. 'Fadding' in line three should be 'Fading.' I like the brevity and directness of your poem, very honest and a cry from your heart. You're not afraid to show your feelings and I like to think that's the best path to eventual healing. Not good to bottle up emotions. Crying is good therapy too. I hope God gives you eventual relief. I've found praying for the source - person involved - of my pain does give me some relief, for their well-being. I'm not a churchgoer and really can't stand religion. Best wishes to you, and thanks for the open-hearted poem.

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