Humping Ground Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Humping Ground



Raising spade swinging hard esence time
to us there is no second chance.
Avalanche of pain no tears of great I bear
all share.
Inside freezing mind is leaving singing of
the choir.
Next to you upon my face smelling scent
sweet clean is water pure.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonny Rainshine 14 December 2008

'...sweet clean is water pure' has an almost perfect rhythm to it. Interesting and original phrasing. Nice work.

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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